Fan Fiction by Neuromancer---Freelancer: Armageddon Version

Sat Jul 30, 2005 7:06 am by Killa

I hope no one is really sad that Trent is dead. I never really liked him anyway. I think Micro$oft really screwed up when making their main character. I can't stand the way he talks, and the way he jiggles his butt, gah! Very good Neuro, as I say for the second time.

The story was rounded off excellently, however, as much as I hate to say it, I couldn't help but feel that the end was a little anti-climactic.

Sat Jul 30, 2005 10:38 am by Wilde

Great job! Excellent ending.

Sat Jul 30, 2005 3:22 pm by neuromancer

And now...the closing credits!

A big thanks to all who have taken the time to read this and leave feedback. I really appreciate the comments.

There are a few people I feel the need to mention by name.

First of all, a big thanks to Bret Bretonian, wherever he's gone, for giving me the impetus to continue this story after a long absence.

Another big thanks to Codename for the constructive criticism. Your comments really did make the story read better.

And finally, another big thanks to KIlla for his never-ending smartass comments. What's life without a little sarcasm? You now have no excuse to not finish your fanfic. Dom't make me come over there and whoop your ass...

Finally, if I may indulge in a little self-promotion...Don't forget to check out my latest fanfic, Genocide.

Again, thanks to all at TLR who took the time to read this!

---There is no more deeply moving religious experience than cheating on a cheater.

Sat Jul 30, 2005 3:59 pm by ww2jacob

Neuro, loved the story, love your work!

You have done an excellent job on this story, and I hope you keep on writing!

Very, very great job!

Sat Jul 30, 2005 4:38 pm by Killa

Yup, what would my life be without my smartass comments?

Sat Jul 30, 2005 5:42 pm by [GR]_Fallen_Angel

great story nero, I'll be expecting a new prologue on here any day now =P

oh and jacob, ever going to contine Victory at all Cost? I was really enjoying that...

Sat Jul 30, 2005 7:56 pm by ww2jacob

I am going to. I've been having computer problems lately, but I do plan on getting a new chapter up this week.

Sun Jul 31, 2005 8:00 am by Killa

I can't think of a smartass comment to post right now.

Sun Jul 31, 2005 8:18 pm by [GR]_Fallen_Angel

yay =D I'll try and work on another chapter for mine too....

Wed Aug 03, 2005 2:54 pm by Chupa

Great story. Really enjoyed it. I was expectin Juni to get killed, though. Not Trent. Awe Inspireing. (However you spell that)

Ph34r d4 C/-//_/p4c4br4

Thu Aug 04, 2005 1:02 am by Sephiroth-omega

Hi Neuro!!!

Great Story, but the end should have been a little bit longer but its ok.

But i have 1 little question.
Will there be a reworked PDF version of your story somewhere to download??? That would be cool.

Hope your new Fanfic Genocide will be as good as this one.

Fri Aug 19, 2005 12:03 pm by xp194

great story, sad ending, action packed battles. what more could we ask 4???

Fri Aug 19, 2005 3:01 pm by bret bretonian

I have a new home in the shadows Neuro

Thank you, but I must honestly say i really didn't think i did much.

Another job well done here again, but i must confess, i haven't started reading genocide yet. Lets hope FL2 does come out and you find more writing inspiration from that which will keep you around here a bit longer writing fantastic

*takes hat off to Neuro*

Edited by - Bret Bretonian on 8/19/2005 4:14:01 PM

Edited by - Bret Bretonian on 8/19/2005 4:14:32 PM

Tue Dec 13, 2005 12:41 pm by Rankor

It has been years since I've read any stories. But you have managed to do what others could not do. Capture my imagination.
I love a good story and you have done well.

Tue Dec 13, 2005 8:17 pm by J Dawg

Ah, just a gravedig. That's disappointing. I thought this was the conclusion of genocide for a second.

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